Personally i think a improvement would be to remove the constant "clapping" that you have from the start to end, it will make the tune more ambient and to be honest it kinda annoyed me as it sounded out of place and broke the ambient.
However the tune overall sound ambient and maybe even a bit horror-ish, i could hear this in a horror themed game with boss battles, something like silent hill perhaps.
So 3 and a half for me, good luck on your future projects.
Yay! I finally got some criticism!!! I was debating on changing the clap so it at least sounded like it would fit better with the beat especially after the second chorus but i never thought about getting rid of it. It will lose its sega genesis like sound to it but i do agree that it would be an improvement. When i get the chance I will change it and see if I will also have to change a few other things to make it sound ok! Thanks for the response!
You pretty much captured the robot feeling to it, but you could perhaps make it a little heavier ?
and btw, the scream... isnt that R2D2 ( or more vague a Star Wars reference? )
now thats epic!
Well, this song made me turn on my DS and play Soulsilver the moment i heard it.
well done, never wanted to play pokemon so much as now.
Lol well thanks. I'm glad you liked that shit.
Its okay, but room for improvement
As previously said, try to change the organ a little, scrap the thrumpets and put in something else...
overall its pretty good, perhaps make the bells a little louder?
Hmmm it sounds familiar
This tune sounds like its a little inspired by the style "Shin megami tensei" is using in their games.
For me this sounds like it could be used in more like a quiet nightboorhood than a up town tune.
but i give you 9/10 for the effort, dont let everyone take ya down!
Well I've never heard of that before but I will definitely check that out. As for the name I was kinda going for that night time, city (not bustling), kind of feeling.
Tanx for the review!
\m/ >_< \m/
Seriously, you turned a epic song even more epic...
Credits man, it turned out pretty good, not much i can point out on how you can improve it, but keep it up will ya?
Pretty good actually a little metal/industrial sound now and then on newgrounds is good for my ears, you did a pretty good job, even the lyrics may be a little low it made a good addition to the background music.
I have nothing special to point out that people havent said to now..
so i give my normal 3:
10/10 5/5 and the Cookie...
I will take your cookie and eat it with pride.
Well, it reminds me of some good old retro tune from a game long time ago with a little new redux...
So i love it ^^
Impressed how this actually turned out..
9/10 5/5 and a cookie...
Better be a chocolate chip cookie. :P
Trust me. I'm surprised it's getting good reviews, but hey, take what you get. :)
Thanks for the good score and review.
I would say this is one of the better "Factory" songs out there, even if you maybe didnt intend it to be so...
And it sounds a little spaced out, so i this would remind me of a factory theme on some orbital or moon...
Anyway, its a good background theme, but as a song itself it might become a little boring after a while...
8/10, 4/5 and a cookie for the effort...
A remake of this song which havent destroyed the essence in the melody, and even seem a bit related to the game its from...
Or perhaps i have been unlucky looking for remakes/remixes of this tune, but most of them seems to totally screw it over...?
Anyway; left on repeat for an hour at least... may it be that i cant be bothered to change tune, or just because its awsome... thats up to you to decide ;)
Heres a 10, a 5 and a Cookie for your efforts...
When repeat is on for several hours - I know it is a sucess. Glad you like this man, alltough I made it looong ago when the skills wasnt all the way up there.
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